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Memories turned to tears
Contributed by
forgottenone_iam
on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:08:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I see the sun setting beyond the
horizen.
The colors are so beautiful
i could look on forever in a day.
Memories feel my mind as tears
feel my eyes.
I think of every memory with you,
how our love was perfect and
thats the way god intended it to
be for the moment.
I think of my sister and how she
will be gone in a few months, and i
probably wont see much of her.
I think of the guy now that loves me
with all his heart, who would do anything
for me.
I think of the best person in the world
that has just came into my life and shed
some light on what my life is turning into.
I think of my best friend how i havent seen
her in what seems like forever, how i miss
the laughs and all the memorable nights.
As i sit there it becomes dark and i sit
there as tears are running down my eyes,
and memories are filled in my mind.
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2006-06-26 00:08:35]
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Re: Memories turned to tears
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by Kevin on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:18:02 AM AEST
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such a sad write. Excellent none the less, but i know how painful memmories can be. hang in there and i'm sure life will present u w/new opportunites and situations to create lasting, happy memmories.
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Re: Memories turned to tears
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by caz241182 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:32:51 AM AEST
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| aww that is 1 that comes from the heart its a lovly poem its a shame its a sad one when your life turns for the best do one on how happy you are coz there verry good keep up the good work |
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Re: Memories turned to tears
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST
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very creative write on memory and very touching.. you can feel what is written in here.. very good write. i enjoyed this piece. it flows quite well
JENNITTUDE |
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