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Darling Jealousy, why choose me?
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 08:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Oh my darling friend jealousy, why do you strike me?
Why do you turn those who I trust against me?
How could you loathe me so much?
And why do I like this?
I am delusional with my compassion.
I see only the state before me.
My minds eye remains blind in all this.
My decisions are made clearly by me.
Who wishes to argue my feelings?
Who deems themselves wise enough to take a stand?
Tell me who I am!
How I love their dares, how I love their spite.
This ugly emotion crosses its eyes and screams.
A piercing echo only heard by my ears.
A ravenous despise eating me away.
And why am I to blame?
So this is my shout back.
This is my one way to defend myself against slanderous tongues.
Can you look me in the eye now? Can you judge me?
I thought so my cruel friend.
Friendship is compromised by your greedy thoughts.
And in the end we are both forsaken.
How is this fair? Why do I bother?
Please tell me my dear jealousy.
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Re: Darling Jealousy, why choose me?
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by Davinah on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:33:33 AM AEST
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Very well done!
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Re: Darling Jealousy, why choose me?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 04:07:20 AM AEST
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if only we could choose our emotions...
I can often relate to this costly disposition, often overwhelming...and just as you have put it "My minds eye remains blind in all this. "
Overall an interesting personification of emotions.
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Re: Darling Jealousy, why choose me?
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 09:58:33 PM AEST
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great write, i can relate to this completely!
wiz |
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