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The Sale
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 02:52:46 PM in AEST
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My eyes are here to see the way,
But not much good to me today,
For they are sad and oh so blue,
Take my eyes, I give them to you
My arms are limp and so cold,
They require someone to hold,
Someone to take away the pain,
Take them , make me glad again,
Take my soul, and the sorrow,
And all my wishes for tomorrow,
Make them real, do not delay,
My soul is here to take today,
My heart is still beating away,
Ready for someone to come my way,
Its been broken , but is now repaired,
Waiting to be taken by someone who cares.
And me, well I am the owner,
Who some say is such a loner,
Just a joker, beg your pardon,
Look again, aint I a bargain
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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Re: The Sale
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by wizard on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 04:51:41 PM AEST
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nicely done!!
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Re: The Sale
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 05:02:01 PM AEST
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awesome! I like very much... another poem of note sue, well done!
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Re: The Sale
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 05:17:39 PM AEST
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Excellent write Sue. Very clever tongue-in-cheek indeed! lol
Thanks for this. It was most enjoyable. : )
~Breezy
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Re: The Sale
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by Bruce on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:34:34 AM AEST
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| I am sure you are a bargain and someone will get very lucky. Great write |
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Re: The Sale
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:12:02 PM AEST
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I like this a lot ...
Shari |
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Re: The Sale
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 03:30:18 PM AEST
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Too cute...excellent write.
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Re: The Sale
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 01:43:58 AM AEST
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Of course I'll read it all the way through. :-)
I really like the way you have done this and enjoyed it a lot.
You even take the hint of sadness and make it sound happy.
Very nicely done.
Thank you,
Tim
:-)
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Re: The Sale
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:44:52 PM AEST
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Sue~
You are a very clever Miss who can always turn sadness into happiness. Enjoybale and always worth the read. Thank you so much for the rays of hope u shine on us.
warm oz hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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