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ALWAYS
Contributed by
BEE
on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 04:15:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Always
Its been a few months
But to me it no change
My heart is still big
And im still waiting
I miss you like no other
Why did this happen
A few months back we were still datin
The feelings inside me
Have never changed
And the beauty inside you
Will always be the same
I do I do
Really care for you
I do really wanna be with you
But you have moved on
You moved on to bigger and better things
I still wish are life
Was still together
So i can wake up each morning
And see your beautiful face
And i can fall asleep to the noise of heartbeat
My feelings are still fresh
Your still deep in my heart
I cant get you out no matter how hard i try
I wish it could work
I wish it was us
I wish u were mine
So my heart could still shine
But now that i lost you
I cant stop thinking
I lost the most amazing girl in my life
You will never leave my heart
Your always with me
By branden goodrich
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-06-25 04:15:04]
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Re: ALWAYS
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by deadclown on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 04:47:47 AM AEST
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| Did u write this in the hope that this girl would read this? I know it can be hard to move on when u still have all these feelins inside and I'm probabaly jus sayin the usual stuff people say,but she's moved on and that's the way it is. You've only got this one life. Enjoy it while u can.Accept what is and move on yourself.You might suprise urself |
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Re: ALWAYS
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:50:59 PM AEST
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| i like this and i wish she had the same feelings for you i dont know what happened but i know guys with the feelings you have are hard to find so its her lost good luck to you |
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Re: ALWAYS
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by iLOVEthisKID on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 07:12:08 PM AEST
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| i really like this, its cute. |
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Re: ALWAYS
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by light on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 02:42:03 AM AEST
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| VERY deep and STRONG. i LUV it. im gunna rate it a 5 just coz i luv it and i BELIEVE it deserves a 5 based on the style its written in and the way is worded and flows |
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