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Your (Religious) Thoughts
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 02:15:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Your view stem from a Hell-bent crooked tree, continuity.
Mine, from form biblical pieces baked as bread for humanity.
Cemented thoughts, yours, neither gale or lightning can shake.
My thought’s as a leaf swaying in all direction, secure; no fake.
Yours are of past dogmas that cannot evolve or bring change.
My thought transforms, testing others, for I’m in Truth’s range.
You’re pron to believe bad comparisons, void of the His alone.
Mine refract God’s Rainbow, giving meaning from His Phone.
Yours, incite you to marry popular views, not of acceptability.
My counsels implores me to cast aside empty futile notoriety.
All negative-views are hinder better soil, far from superiority.
God plants life in me for His covenant, directed for posterity.
Your thoughts makes you aspire to grand titles of rank offices.
Mine exhort me into a life of surrender and thoughtful services
Yours are analytical, impracticality of religious formality, hey.
I’m filled with picture-views divinely inspired, a higher cliché.
You want popularity, not the ugly, the good, or the prostitute.
I learns towards tru-value, an faithful heart of a pied Piper flute.
Your thoughts write laws, courts, judges, and penalties so blind.
Mine explain the basics of Loving all mankind, as God’s sign.
You value skill, the artist, the philosopher, but not the priest.
I speaks forthrightly of sacrifice and the holy martyrs at least.
You sing the praises of your futile idols and national heroes.
I sings praises of God not the dictates of a controlling Pharaoh
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Re: Your (Religious) Thoughts
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by wizard on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 10:01:12 AM AEST
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nicely done!
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Re: Your (Religious) Thoughts
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by JGB on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST
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I really do love your work. Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Your (Religious) Thoughts
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 05:59:06 PM AEST
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You are truely gifted. Very good job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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