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wHO AM i

Contributed by Bsteel on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 02:10:24 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

When is my time to shine?
shall I break through the ignorance,
All held hostage to the times,
Only through our hardships,
Experience we do find,
Concepts to bless, that history’s tried to test,
Freedom and liberty in all aspects,
Tis not the first nor the last attempt,
Pray that property may transcend over ethnicity and color,
Relgion and culture, and finally trade can expand,
Tis not the first nor the last attempt,
Iraq is the current test,
In which there is no turning back,
Our way of living we must protect,
For at essence in the end,
We are a nation of dreamers till are dying breath,
The social contract that the skies the limit,
Must keep the balance,
Like in texas hold’em,
You can’t change the dealer in midshuffle,
You can try but you can’t change the hearts of the people,
Our culture manifests this path by the dollar,
For it leads to the greatest honor,
Of having the choice to be free from labor,
Yet this unleashing of liberty,
Which is God’s property,
Thus making a private contract with thee,
Brings about great responsibility,
Corporations making promises they can’t keep,
University’s fueled by greed,
Passive subconcious feminine curriculums,
See once you justify natural law,
the government wants you to die while at war,
for they stole my essence my soul,
and it shines no more, like a big black hole,
and all connclusions emanate from the work you had done,
***** become envious men turn to boys,
rob my *****, my spiirtuality was robbed,
when is my time to shine?

Copyright Â© Bsteel ... [ 2006-06-25 02:10:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: wHO AM i (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 10:03:44 AM AEST
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nicely done!!

wiz

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