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bloodshot eyes.
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 07:24:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I stand and face the wind,
protected, and not afraid.
I stand here stronger then ever before,
blood thicker, not so easily spilled.
I stand here ready to take you on,
beaten, and destroyed once or twice before.
I stand here wanting to prove what is said,
"third time is always a charm."
I stand here in anger,
so full of rage, look into my bloodshot eyes,
tell me, are you scared yet?
I stand here waiting for your first move,
draw your knife, atempt your murderous plan.
I stand here stable, steadfast and furious
I stand here determined, excited to fight.
You think I am nearing my end,
that it is time to take my last breath.
You say you will knock me down again,
you want me to prepare for my final fall.
Then you will claim victory once more
and call yourself a king...
You will finger paint in my blood
and show the world your hands stained red....
What a beautiful dream that is you have
but reality must always take its tole
How many times do you think it takes
for someone to learn your demonic ways?
Do you see what you have done?
You have created a monster, more powerfull then you...
And now i stand here,
thirsty for revenge
hungry for your heart
craving the taste of your blood...
Take your stance, and I will take mine,
lets see whos battle this is to win..
Draw your knife, and I will draw mine,
lets see whos blade cuts deeper.
I stand here waiting...with bloodshot eyes...
full of anger, engrossed by rage.
I stand here with my blade in hand, drenched in blood,
remnance of my practice run.....
We stand here face to face
both ready to give the other their last fight...
Let the battle begin, let the best win...
May the suffering you intentionaly cause
come to end, one way or another......
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purplestary
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2006-06-24 19:24:21]
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Re: bloodshot eyes.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 12:52:00 AM AEST
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Wow!! Exceptional grasp on depicting anger here!
This write was extremely powerful and emotional.
And you are right .. lots of hidden meanings and
definitely something most can relate to.
That, in itself is almost unfortunate.. battles are not
fun. Couldn't we just have a beer and talk?
lol
sorry .. lol great write. Most intriguing.
~Breezy |
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Re: bloodshot eyes.
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by pureheart07 on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 05:49:32 AM AEST
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| This great! It's one of the best I've read on this site. You wrote in way that was full emtion full of the massage you wanted to send wich is what makes it so good. |
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Re: bloodshot eyes.
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:41:21 PM AEST
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You're got a talent...you need to write more often.
Jeff |
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Re: bloodshot eyes.
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by chaos78 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:41:32 PM AEST
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| u let the words flow alright and it is great love the write such a good read |
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Re: bloodshot eyes.
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by needledancing on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 03:42:33 AM AEST
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| You have defined in the most impressive way the strength one can gain when constantly challenged and attacked. The strength you emit here transfered immediately. I was ready to take on the world and fight for my right to be me. Great piece for all who have been face to the earth and getting up for that last defence which will purify them. WOW, WOW ,WOW! |
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Re: bloodshot eyes.
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:05:43 PM AEST
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wow that was emotional and powerful, very good keep it up.....
=) |
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Re: bloodshot eyes.
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by ShaonKra on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 01:27:40 PM AEST
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This is good, quite gripping.
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