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I Always Need You

Contributed by PoeticLilMama on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 11:31:40 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Baby I need you always, I don't care if you're sick or not
I don't care if your hands are cold or your head is hot
I don't care if you have a strep throat or some type of unknown disease
I always need you, you're like my drug and I become a fein
Without you right there by my side what am I to do
Without a hug, a kiss, there's no me w/o you
A kiss from you could brighten my whole day
A touch from you cures me in everyway
Because I need you and without you I would die
If I had it my way, I'd never leave your side
I always need you and this ain't no type of little love poem
This is what I'm really feeling you're like a dog and I'm the bone
Do w/e to me lick me, bite me, eat me
Because at the end of the day it's always J.G. and R.D.
Baby at night who would be there to ride
You gotta promise me you'll always be mine
I love you and when I say that it's really meant
Now that I got you it's like God has answered my prayers b4 they were even sent
I'm not trying to get you all gassed up or have you thinking you're the King
But when I really think about it, look at how much joy you bring
You make me so happy and I don't even think you could understand
How much I really, truly cherish to have you as My Man

- I Always Need You -

Copyright © PoeticLilMama ... [ 2006-06-24 11:31:40]
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Re: I Always Need You (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 11:57:45 AM AEST
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This is not bad, your rhyme scheme is good but i would work on the beat structure a little more.

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