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ice
Contributed by
damned_saint
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Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 03:19:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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blaze of fire
burns through the night
souls become one
fills the hollow
emptiness in the dark
candles afloat
waters of Nile
skies turned gray
blood flowed from the moon
flowers are withered
flesh has decayed
but the seeds of life
from the ruins
of the garden of fire
once again, sprang up to life
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damned_saint
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2006-06-24 03:19:04]
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Re: ice
(User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 09:55:55 AM AEST
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wow..i loved that, i thought it was awesome!!
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Re: ice
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by Sylvias on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 10:44:37 PM AEST
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| I like the line "blood flowed from the moon.". I suggest changing the title though. |
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