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High School Blues
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 01:30:21 AM in AEST
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The school oval- oh what joy.
Here I am again
The sun is shining-
That’s one blessing
But the breeze is in my hair and I feel cold
The sound of laughter and gossip rings in my ears
As I observe the students in their glory of adolescence.
I silently watch like an outcast.
The grass is green and littered with papers
It’s the same everyday here
Same people
Same meaningless chatter
Of weekend alcoholic and sexual conquests
Same grass
My jumpers too daggy
My hairs not cool enough
And I’ve got food stuck in my braces
The worst thing of all
Is his sly grin, cheap stare
And the way he holds her undeserving hand
(just punch me in the face why don’t you.
for it wouldn’t hurt as much this)
I HATE this place.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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Re: High School Blues
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by BSteel on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 01:41:10 AM AEST
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wow astounded by some lines
good for any age but dont forget its a long jounrny |
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Re: High School Blues
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by BSteel on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 01:41:18 AM AEST
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wow astounded by some lines
good for any age but dont forget its a long jounrny |
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Re: High School Blues
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by wizard on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 09:51:01 AM AEST
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wow PUNKA, that was an incredible write! so full of emotion...nicely done!
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Re: High School Blues
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 11:36:41 PM AEST
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though noone has yet..(and I'm so sorry I didn't the first time)
"Welcome Back Rach!"
..the place just wasn't the same without you.. I've always loved your work and thought of you as only a few poets.. (counted on a half a hand) that I can take a lesson from, and not only from a literary perspective.. but from an emotional one as well : )
that being said.. I feel your pain - I know what it's like to feel like an outcast.. and long for things you think might never come your way. The only advice I can give, (after growing sick and tired of trying to please everybody all the time) is to be yourself. There are many wonderful qualities about you, that your fellow students know nothing of. Keeping that in mind should give you the confidence you need to have them all groveling at your feet by the end of the academic season- believe me on this - confidence will exude all that you are.
(too many great qualities to mention..)
your work, is as it's always been my friend, STELLAR! ..keep it here, for all the support you'll ever need!
Your friend..
Billy
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Re: High School Blues
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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sad writing, says something ... whats up, whats new? saw your acct page.. just another hell above the ground..
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Re: High School Blues
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 08:39:01 PM AEST
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wow some dissatisfaction goin on here i'd say, and yet what i'd give 2 be there again, oh well u still have that impact in your writting as u always did. Keep it up it'll get better nice writting as usual, very meaningful coming the soul.
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