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you just don't get it
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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say the right words
the goblin king said
something horrible has happened
lost in the translation
of confusion
and neglect
misunderstood
both ways
backwards and forwards
through the looking glass
she fell
wondering wondering wondering
think harder, young woman
try more
give more
take less
figure out why, you woman-child
why
you
just
don't
get
it
january 29. 2003
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LadyDama
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2003-02-08 20:40:00]
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Re: you just don't get it
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 04:04:32 AM AEST
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ladyDama
Now thereby hangs a tale
I just don't get the end bit
of what is going wrrong
this thing for which
you long
what is
it
?
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Re: you just don't get it
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 04:17:00 AM AEST
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| ... i am the step mother in a family where my step daughter lives with us... a sticky situation, it has been, for several years... and sometimes, when the frustration gets to be too much... i simple relent... but inside, which is where my writing comes from... i let it out... i possibly should have put this poem in with the sarcastic poems... ... thank you for your "poem comment"... i shall enjoy reading your works, me thinks... |
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Re: you just don't get it
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by TheSpiritx on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:09:38 PM AEST
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| Perhaps Wry isn't a fan of the application of perceptions. I read this twice, one with objectivity and one after having read your perspective on it. Either way, I understood the gist of it. With a foreknowledge of what to expect the meaning to be the second time, however, my understanding was clarified and I know how dfficult it can be for both members of this relationship to cope. Thanks for the poem, Lady.. :) |
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Re: you just don't get it
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by M on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 11:26:16 AM AEST
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| amazing... i love the way you ended it, but the whole thing is amazing |
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Re: you just don't get it
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by karoody on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 10:36:55 PM AEST
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LadyDama,
Seeing your reasons for writing this, made it very interesting. I understood the idea, though the step daughter scenario right off. What you did here put you among my favs. For you have wrote this in a way that many can relate, regaurdless of the situation. A rare talent to come across.
Kara |
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