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Screaming
Contributed by
Tricky
on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 07:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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all of the things
that remind me of you
they're tearin me down
it's pullin me thorugh
but you can't see
what you're doin to me
it's tearin me down & I can't feel what's happening
nothing seems real & you can't hear the cries that I'm screaming to you
the scent of your skin
it tears up my eyes
I'm falling below
to my own demise
but you can't see
what you're doin to me
it's tearin me down & I can't feel what's happening
nothing seems real & you can't hear the cries that I'm screaming to you
I'm screaming
I'm screaming
I'm screaming to you
why can't you see me
why can't you feel...
the pain I'm going through
Copyright ©
Tricky
... [
2006-06-23 19:44:08]
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Re: Screaming
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:21:14 PM AEST
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i liked this. a lot, actually. well, i think they are good lyrics....trying to get a good beat going in my head....
~lexy~ |
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Re: Screaming
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by Tricky on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 10:59:20 AM AEST
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| I'd really appreciate your feedback on this poem/song. Thanks all! |
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Re: Screaming
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:10:45 PM AEST
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Hey girl
This is really great. It really would make great song lyrics, I think. I'd comment more sincerely and stuff, but as you know I'm all ADD at the moment lol
Love you!
~Chels |
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