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Everything you told me was a ***** lie

Contributed by rottenrioter on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 02:48:23 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Everything you told me was a ***** lie

You told me that one day we'd be together but that will never be

I gave up all I had

because you led me on to belive that I actually had a chance

A chance to be happy but that will never be

Now i see the way you truly are

I gave up a guy that actually loved me because you made me belive that I could have better

Now I realize that everything you told me that day was a ***** LIE

I found that out for myself the day you actually ditched me for another girl

I thought that I was the one

You promised me we'd be together

I'm dead inside

Dead to the world

You've killed me




Copyright © rottenrioter ... [ 2006-06-23 14:48:23]
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Re: Everything you told me was a ***** lie (User Rating: 1 )
by RYOFU on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 04:13:43 PM AEST
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good write! Sorry for the way you have been treated! Guys are awful 99.9% of the time. For them its always about the next girl. I hope you find the .1% that treats you like gold!


Re: Everything you told me was a ***** lie (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenXbyManyX on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 10:11:23 AM AEST
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Okay, let me let you in on a little secret, GUYS LIE! everyone pretty much lies.

The same thing happened to me SO many times. I've always been told there will be someone out there. Hopeless as I feel, someone will come along.

This poem hit home for me because I know how it feels to be hurt. It sucks. If u ever wanna talk send me a message.

Good luck,

Lauren ;)




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