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My Letter to You
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:02:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You So understanding; likest to my own trend
Eyes So blue; Looks as they will never end
Body So harmless; Rapier of the dead
Skin Of white snow, nails of blood red.
Lonely and alone, Watching as you sleep
Silent So quiet; Lips that never speak
Inert, don't move in this bondage of Fetter
Listen as you sleep To my love letter
Hurt, so hurt; As if thy were possessed
Sad, So sad; As if thy wanted death
Lest, Depressed; Yearning to cry
Sweven Dreams of death and Wishing to die
Near, By the bed, I see a blood coated knife
Marked On her face, I see not a sign of life
Adust to asunder, we shall call this the end
Sadly, If I shall leave you, our aglow will not ascend
Taken by the light, it took the likest to see
Meek, so bitter; Shalt it Banish thee?
Sleep, once again I watch you sleep, This time forever
Listen As you dream To my love letter
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Re: My Letter to You
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by Zeego_of_the_Shadowfolk on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:14:43 AM AEST
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| I really liked it. The imagery you used is amazing! |
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Re: My Letter to You
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by desperatepoet7 on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:17:20 AM AEST
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| this is an AMAZiNG poem... i love it :] |
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Re: My Letter to You
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:31:04 AM AEST
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a beautifully woven tapestry of words leaving one with a picture well defined
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Re: My Letter to You
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by a7x36 on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:50:50 AM AEST
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| great words, great flow and powerful emotions |
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