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SON
Contributed by
sadaddy
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Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 03:06:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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The day we met
It was sunny and bright
We drove for hours
To the place where you were kept
You were but three
Such a wonderful sight
You were so tiny
You were full of get-up-and-go
You were so fast
You ran like a flash
It was hard
To keep in sight
You ran out that door
As quick as you could
You were yelling
Daddy Daddy Daddy
As ran down those stairs
You slipped and fill
I ran to you
And picked you up
From that grown
You had such a frown
I told you it would be ok
As I brushed you off
I kissed your knee
To ease the pain
You begin to cry
With those big brown eyes
All I could do
Was to hug you tight
As those tears continued run
I bounced you in my arms
As to comfort you
As a father would
I sat down us down
On those steps
That you just fell down
To wipe the tears that ran so clear
This was the day
When we first met
I knew just then
You could be
The son we could not have
You melted my heart
This much is true
It could only be one thing
For child as magnificent as you
It is my love
I could give to you
From that day forward
I knew it to be true
We would become
This new family of four
Copyright ©
sadaddy
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2006-06-23 03:06:17]
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Re: SON
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by poet_in_waiting on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:35:43 AM AEST
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despite a couple of clumsy moments in the poem itself, this poem if very nice ...
daddy daddy!! i can't to get home every day to hear it my self
cheers
sean |
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Re: SON
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by thesinner on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 03:44:41 PM AEST
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| I hope you will keep this for your son, the flow may be off , but the love is strong. I think that's all that matters here. |
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Re: SON
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by sandypoet on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 05:35:27 AM AEST
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| awee what a day it was I bet... It also touched my heart to see your love shine through to this child it reminds me of the Heavenly Father. He doesn't want us hurt, desires us to keep from harm but He is there when we do get hurt . Lover your way of poetry, comes right from the Heart. |
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Re: SON
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by starry_night on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 04:07:59 AM AEST
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| Aww, this poem is right from the heart ... where all good poems should come from - this is something you should keep for him when he is 18 ... it brought a tear to my eye, well done ... Jan |
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Re: SON
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by ever1der on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:13:26 AM AEST
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every poem about children makes me cry..sons and dads especially. thanks
mary |
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