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cherry blossoms

Contributed by damned_saint on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 02:45:45 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



silts of grace walking in the shadows of molten graves
damsels flared infascating depths
my hands are soiled with obscure silence
undemized by the noctunal beings floating inside my head.


dancing in the rain
in these obscene generous mooonlight
i succumb into my fears
i forgot that i still have you

years may come and go
as time flies swiftly into the serene waters
overflowing with joy
but devastated by fears

this is the time where i came face to face
with the i could be
the serile assasin
of venidictum's agony

knelt down before you
shimmering light, fragrant incense
essenses afloat the midst
of thy uncunning breeze

slowly as i was swept away in miles
thousands never foretold
with dreams of the sunlight
and shores by the moonlight

standing from the point where nowhere lies
hear me with all the calmness never could be
a new born rebel
to infrastrate the shallow seas

sweet mist from the vineyards
in cahoots with the unknown
blazed up through the air
in this senseless being

staring closely to death
holding his breath
to the very last
full measure of his despair




Copyright © damned_saint ... [ 2006-06-23 02:45:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: cherry blossoms (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:23:30 PM AEST
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This is fresh and inspiring and vivid, I like it alot.

"dancing in the rain
in these obscene generous mooonlight
i succumb into my fears
i forgot that i still have you"

That really stuck out to me. good write and keep it up.

xXx

~kei


Re: cherry blossoms (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 01:21:49 AM AEST
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nice very nice i enjoy reading this piece




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