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Again
Contributed by
bluestars
on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 01:46:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wake up again,
believing your still here.
I thought I could play pretend,
and feel your hand wipe my tears.
I close my eyes
I dream of you.
Your presence still flys,
in this dark old room.
My candle still burns,
its the only thing alive
for I have not learned yet,
how to get you out of my mind.
I lay awake,
too tired to fall asleep
for time cant take,
the love I feel for you in me.
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bluestars
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2006-06-23 01:46:38]
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Re: Again
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by a7x36 on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 01:50:02 AM AEST
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| "your presence still flys" i rlly like this line, the whole thing is a good display of emotion, good luck w/this |
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Re: Again
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by Davinah on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 05:38:43 AM AEST
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Very nice!
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