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IS YOUR LOVE REAL!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Do you think that we should part,
Taking with you most of my Heart?
Do you think that I'd survive,
Or even want to be alive?
Do you think there'll come a day
That I would want to walk away?
If you do you know me not.
Better for me if I was shot!
Do you think there ever will be
A day that you really love me,
Half as much as I do you?
I want to know so tell me true!
Do you think that anytime soon
That I could walk into your room?
And hold you tightly in my arms,
Enraptured with your many charms?
I pray for words bout how you feel
To let me know if your love is real!
Or do you think that I should go?
I really, really need to know!
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Robert_Edgar_Burns
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2003-02-08 19:00:00]
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Re: IS YOUR LOVE REAL!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 07:04:03 PM AEST
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| sad heart-breaking music I hear, great write, thanks for sharing |
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Re: IS YOUR LOVE REAL!
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 08:01:28 PM AEST
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It can be sad but to me it shows a luv that refuse to die no matter what.. This to me is an admiral quality in a man!! It's only reason I have so much respect for you..
Luvit, luvu,
emy
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Re: IS YOUR LOVE REAL!
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:23:43 PM AEST
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R.E.B. Boy do I know that feelig. Excellent write.
I think in that frame of mind you'ld appreciate
one I wrote recently.......
"I don't want to see you anymore"
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Re: IS YOUR LOVE REAL!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:17:37 PM AEST
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Really touching write, Rob... I can identify!!
Jenni |
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