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Storm
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Storm
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Rode to work,
On the tail of a storm.
Heavy rain,
Above the norm.
Lightning flashing,
Across the sky.
Fevered pace,
Mounting high.
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Trees swaying,
From a pounding wind.
Rocking the car,
Again and again.
Puddles forming,
On the road.
Ready to break,
From the heavy load.
~
From out my window,
My eyes did see.
Animals two by two,
In front of me.
Pacing forwardly,
In the rain.
Made me wonder,
From where they came.
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And as I drove,
This rainy morn.
To the left,
My eyes were torn.
On a hill,
A structure tall.
With a huge deck,
And mighty walls.
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With a little man,
Waving his arms
Franticly,
Sounding the alarm.
Had the day,
Finally came.
When God wouldn’t,
Stop the rain?
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Had punishment,
Found the door?
From all the years,
We simply ignored.
The existence of man,
Ending soon.
From the sin,
That sealed our dome.
~
With a crack of thunder,
I woke up scared.
Thankful to be awake,
From the dream I feared.
Looked out the window,
The sun was bright,
With a rainbow beaming,
To my delight.
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2006-06-22 15:27:28]
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Re: Storm
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by kreechur on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:36:49 PM AEST
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| god hates me too..... |
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Re: Storm
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 05:15:25 PM AEST
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sounds like a rough time
nice write |
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Re: Storm
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by Heartfilledblood on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 01:14:47 AM AEST
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| I love your writing :) Keep it up man. Your so good at it. |
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Re: Storm
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by wrdz on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 03:14:54 PM AEST
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| I needed that reminder of what was. We all do at some time or another. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Storm
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by Winterland on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 04:58:01 PM AEST
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Very nice work Jeff! I especially liked the rainbow ending. Wonderful message for all of us in there.
Smiles,
Jennifer |
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