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Tired Sun
Contributed by
Axle
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Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 10:22:55 AM in AEST
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As the tired sun sets a new day awaits.
For some this new day will bring blessings. For others it will not.
For many these experiences will be short lived
as once the tired sun sets a new day will always await.
Copyright ©
Axle
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2006-06-22 10:22:55]
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Re: Tired Sun
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 09:47:48 AM AEST
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| This is a really nice poem. I quite enjoyed it |
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Re: Tired Sun
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by freckle on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 02:13:18 PM AEST
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An interesting poem. I read it through several times to try and get the feel of it down.
My opinions of it are conflicted..I like strong, short poems and feel that perhaps a really cool Haiku is hiding here...
On the other hand, I think you could have expanded a little more...given more reason as to why the sun is tired...
Glad I read it...it has me pondering!
And thanks for sharing!
Carol |
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Re: Tired Sun
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 09:33:14 AM AEST
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| short and very sweet! |
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