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When Darkness Descends
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 02:50:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look up at the evening sky,
And ask the question,why oh why,
Is life so tedious, and such a test,
When is my turn to take a rest,
Dark clouds appear and bring the rain,
Like me awash with the pain,
The coldness eats away at my soul,
As the blackness over me takes control,
No brightness here, to make me see,
No light at the end of the tunnel for me,
Just total obscurity, hidden snares,
Obliterate me and bring despair,
Secluded in my own space,
Far away from the human race,
Tense and scared, chilled to the bone,
Inconsolable, and so alone,
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jerseysue
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2006-06-22 02:50:28]
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Re: When Darkness Descends
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:39:23 AM AEST
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Sue~
I can't explain to you how much I felt every emotion behind the words that u have written.
My God it's as if u are looking through my eyes and onto the world. A very heartfelt write that I know alot of us can relate to.
An outstanding and brilliantly ascribed write penned by a very talented and special lady. Thanks for sharing ur wonderful work with us Sue~
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: When Darkness Descends
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 08:09:22 AM AEST
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Sue, I believe it is in our darkest moments that we can see most clearly into our own hearts. This poem is a perfect example. You penned your heart to the page on this and it is beautiful, albeit sad. Well done.
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Re: When Darkness Descends
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 06:32:59 PM AEST
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Well my British buddy, that sad 'n' wonderful write documents water under the bridge thinkin' so look ahead to those white capped rushin' rivers of exhilarating exitement up ahead.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: When Darkness Descends
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 10:13:11 AM AEST
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This is a poem I can really relate to, just as it seems I'm getting over one hurdle, another pops up and before I can see it I've tripped... A very honest and effective write, thanks for sharing,
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