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Can't Wait
Contributed by
bluestars
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Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:59:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The days go by slowly,
as I count the minutes in my head
I can't wait, I feel lonely
as I lay on my bed, I think ahead...
I dream of you arriving here,
and us finally being able to hug and kiss.
How I will have you so near
and whispear that I missed your sweet lips.
I just want to sit and stare at your eyes
not care what happens at all,
just stare at the stars that fall
be silent in the night,
as the moon passes us by.
I can't wait to wake up
knowing your next to me,
and your smile will be the first thing I'll see.
You'll lighten up the day as you sing to me
how we'll love each other endlessly.
Oh, I can't wait
Can you?
I know that it's our destiny, our fate
no matter how long it may be,
we'll live forever happily.
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bluestars
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2006-06-22 01:59:06]
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Re: Can't Wait
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:44:43 AM AEST
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Eve~
A beautiful and romantic write. I love the mood u set and imagery u cast into ur readers head. A most enjoyable write filled with such loving emotions. Thanks for sharing ur write with us Eve~
The best of wishes to u always,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Can't Wait
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by kreechur on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:52:02 PM AEST
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| i hated it.... bored me to tears...sounded more like a greeting card..... |
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Re: Can't Wait
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 06:22:20 PM AEST
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I think it's amazing how we can script our happy ever after and then git with it and go fer it! Great write. Who is this creep "kreecher" anyway? No doubt a jerk don't deserve to belong on YPDC! Keep up your storybook work and disregard jerkin' jerks.
wabl
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Re: Can't Wait
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 09:42:19 PM AEST
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Genuinely lovely work from the heart and beyond.
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Re: Can't Wait
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 01:33:34 AM AEST
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a flowing poem. Was my delight to read it. I loved how you showed the scene beneath the stars vivid and lovely.
Hey Keech shut ur pie hole and get off YPDC!
People like that make me made excuse me please lol!
Huggers
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