Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 10-November 13:55:21 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

My Tears of Mud

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:47:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You asked what I feel within,
Vitalic hunger clawing at my skin
My only quintessence now impure
You ask why I'm marked and not simplectic
I have cuts down my arm and I'm dying, hectic
Belittled before they could find my cure
You ask me why I feel this way
I've been scorned and the pain seems to stay
O' my fatal insecurity pushing you away..
Es ist Sie, den ich liebe

Clawing at my eyes - they bleed, unclear
So these tears would not flow today
Finding myself alone is my only fear
I never want you to go away
My vanity, it shows through blood
In vain I cry, my tears of mud
Here I carve the bane of life

Meine Risse Schlamms

May I ask why you portend my pain?
And you ask why my blood drips like rain
Within my hyaline eyes you stare..
There's no visible answer
To why the cuts remain
Narben sollen dort bleiben




Copyright © Lucid_Tides ... [ 2006-06-21 23:47:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: My Tears of Mud (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i like how u use a foreign language in ur poetry, even though i have no clue wat it means, it adds effect, ur big vocabulary helps u write meaningful, new rhymes, good work


Re: My Tears of Mud (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:30:17 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Wow, a very powerful poem,
I love it, great job


Re: My Tears of Mud (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 02:24:23 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I admit its a very powerful write
good job on this


Re: My Tears of Mud (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:57:16 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
A powerful, deep and emotional write. You are a talented writer who can convey their thoughts very well. I love the way u have used the foreign language and blended it well with ur poem. a superb job. Well done.
best wishes to u always,
`*suzie Q*~


Re: My Tears of Mud (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Daisy on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 04:50:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Your words are so beautiful. I love the foreign language, perchance not so foreign to you?




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com