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The Blade of Fate - II
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 10:58:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Shadows cast,
Dead roses fade,
For our lives we have prayed
She shall come,
We shall die,
One last time we shall cry
Her embrace shall kill us all,
One-by-one we shall fall,
As I'm scortched,
I see her eyes,
I see why this Demon cries
As she cried,
Her screams were sweven Arias
that withered My Soul
Like tears of the Amor,
A breath-taking toll
And she cried,
for this flaming hell,
A Totured soul-erotica,
A sad soul that once fell
Hidden in this forest mist,
She hides her burden's pain
In a world of her icy tryst,
She cuts into her vein
Her cuts stand so lucid
She shall kill me if she sees
I now endure the pain she feels,
With a piercing glance between the trees
And she whispers
Soft notes that caressed
Her poetry hit me,
As if stabbings to my chest
Wouldst she greet me
In a tryst of a Dream?
Her last tapper snuffed
A life settled in a stream
My eyes,
Saddened,
now parched,
Thus, I shall not let them shut
I watch her last breath
Taken by the cut
This Blade of Fate
Has taken another life
This once beautiful spirit
Lived on the knife
A suttle moment of silence
Came with the marks of hate
Another soul misguided
By this lonel blade of fate
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Re: The Blade of Fate - II
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:20:33 PM AEST
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wow nicely done
sad yet very dark
just the way i like it.
great job |
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Re: The Blade of Fate - II
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:36:30 PM AEST
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wow ...nicely done. It was very dark but deep. I like this a lot.
~Lo |
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