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Only He Knows
Contributed by
catz77
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Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 06:51:42 PM in AEST
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You will never know when a plane might crash
You will never know when a tumor dwells inside
You will never know when a fire might start
Or if you might be the one trying to hide
No one knows how silent or painful it will be
No one knows when death will occur
No one will know, but the God we seek
Before it’s too late
Before your last breath
Ask for forgiveness
So he may save you from death
Copyright ©
catz77
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2006-06-21 18:51:42]
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Re: Only He Knows
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 07:06:23 PM AEST
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awesome write, catz..you are very talented!
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Re: Only He Knows
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by Lady_Daisy on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 04:57:53 AM AEST
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| This somewhat lacks imagination. I feel that it needs more metaphors, similes, or something. |
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