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Promises Stall
Contributed by
vermilion
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Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:51:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears cling to lashes
Promises stall
My heart in her hands throughout it all
Water to ashes
And nothing at all
Softens the ground as we helplessly fall
Wings that are breaking
Ties that will blind
The tears in her eyes as I leave her behind
Smiles we are faking
Cords that unwind
Hopelessly lost in the depths of her mind
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vermilion
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2006-06-21 14:51:18]
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Re: Promises Stall
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:50:29 AM AEST
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deep. powerful. and sad. Well crafted poem and great job expressing emotions.
take care
Christina |
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Re: Promises Stall
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 07:39:35 AM AEST
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softly beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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