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not so empty road
Contributed by
wolf_tamer
on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:16:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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as i walk down an empty road
my heads in the clouds
but my feet are on the road
i imagine to myself
the one person i long to be with
not realising the road wasn't as empty as i thought
i'm being followed
but my head stays in the clouds
as i walk down the not so empty road
i continue to think
of my one true love
and as i did so
i am so happy i could fly up to the clouds
and walk on them, instead of the road
then all of a sudden
i'm grabbed form behind
and swooped into a warm loving kiss
i am back on the road
with my one true love
the image that kept my head in the clouds
and i couldn't be happier
until he said the three biggest words
so we continue to walk down the not so empty road
hand in hand, i'm no longer in the clouds
when he says what he has wanted to say
"i love you" then my heart skips a beat
" i love you, too " i say as we continue to walk down the not so empty road.
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Re: not so empty road
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by ChildofGod on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:45:16 AM AEST
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I believe that the poem was very illustrated. As a poem should be or any selectoin being read!! However, there were a few grammar errors but, they may have been intentional?
Good Luck and Keep your head in the clouds!! |
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Re: not so empty road
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by myselfindreams on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 01:50:54 PM AEST
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very enjoyable read, thank you, I liked it
Jalens |
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Re: not so empty road
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 11:30:28 AM AEST
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nice very nice
i enjoy reading this piece
good job |
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