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DISEASE
Contributed by
Davinah
on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 01:07:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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An expression of detached amusement on my face
Left to my own devices
With too much time to kill
The devil always finds work for idle hands
Completely unmoved and desensitized
I obtain my pleasures by deception
Foul and violent fantasies dwell
In some dark corner of my mind
I walk through darkness
Through fields of shrinking violets
Maintaining my tragic empire
Through a strategy of divide and rule
When one door closes another one opens
And all of them are gates to hell
So I continue my journey, safe in the knowledge
That the years to come are wasted breath
Cursed with a cruel and vicious streak
I feel compelled to step out of line
A complete and utter deviant
As guilty as sin, I stand corrected
Yet I never wanted this disease
I wish it were on the decline
So tonight I will come undone
And lay myself to rest
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2006-06-21 01:07:57]
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Re: DISEASE
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:12:40 AM AEST
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the very essence of indifference
and like a 'zombe'.. you put forth.. ALL your self-loathing - and greatest apathy.. as always..
I wanna wish you well but that could perhaps, be detrimental to the work..lol
your words:
(blossoms perpetual) - offering up, some bitter fruit~
painful.. brilliant
Billy
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Re: DISEASE
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:44:30 AM AEST
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I agree with Billy on this write
good job |
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Re: DISEASE
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by Somnium on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 07:04:35 AM AEST
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Divinely crafted work
Well done
Ben
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Re: DISEASE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:59:07 AM AEST
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One of the best dark poems i've read in awhile. Actually makes scence. didn't feel like i was reading a poem but a tesament 2 the exzistance of reality. Good style u have.
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Re: DISEASE
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by wizard on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:15:52 AM AEST
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very nice write..i can relate as i have walked through these opening doors you write of...on more than one occasion!! excellent write!!
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