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Presentation the Epidemic Deception

Contributed by Lilly-Quill on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 11:58:15 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

The whole world has become possessed with adherences!
Now presentations are entrapments for ultimate appearances.
Multitudes buy into the LIE, that "you are what you possess.”
Desiring loved, getting lost in the facade for the popular caress.

From kid’s pressurized domain, we're selling-out to buy in cheap.
Most equates 'wealth and possessions~ to happiness, as sheik.
It's now an epidemic, selling the soul for the magic-carpet ride.
The magic pill, the perfect thrill, the Image or temporary high.

Man has idolized, unrealistically, their perfect choice in a mate.
Or they're sold on the bad-ass-character, for delusion's sake.
Fearful of not being accepted, totally, we have a Kodak Moment.
Oft' we even buy into projections and lose validation, to lament.

Caught for over-expenditures, noted reason: obsessed illusion.
Dating shows portray importance of presentation for conclusion.
Hard to find real people, whose character is out-there and true.
So few disclosed, people know or value themselves; do you~?

Copyright Â© Lilly-Quill ... [ 2006-06-20 23:58:15]
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Re: Presentation the Epidemic Deception (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 07:08:51 PM AEST
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Wow girlie I love your style! It was an amazing piece of work. One of the best I have read in a while here. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of yours.

~Lo

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