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| Broken |
Contributed by
machinegunbarbie
on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 08:32:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Nothing.
Ever.
I hold this ache,
until forever.
Far gone.
Too clever.
I'm broken,
your never.
Think back
I smile
Ride the road
Another mile.
Within sight
No mind
doomed fate
lost time.
Exhausted.
Used.
Scars bleed,
egos bruised.
Tempted,
Bent and
dented.
Fears alive,
the sins arrive
Chained inside
an angry mind.
The nights cry,
the days die.
I reach so far,
Until I fly.
I feel your words,
a hesitated sigh,
A confused goodbye.
The day is done
Today is gone
I close my eyes
and feel the sun.
With no direction
and nowhere to go
I start to run.
Copyright ©
machinegunbarbie
... [
2006-06-20 20:32:12]
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Re: | Broken |
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:06:24 PM AEST
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the absence of unnecessary words make the message stand out so strongly...i love this...it has great flow and emotion!
awesome write
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Re: | Broken |
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 10:18:07 PM AEST
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| I love it... its simply simple yet so cryptic... its nice to see something away from the original... |
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:17:31 AM AEST
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It has got a very nice swing to it :)
Enjoyable to read. Great stuff!
~Davinah~ |
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Re: | Broken |
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 12:36:52 PM AEST
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This was amazing... I likedthe flow and words... You don't always have to write in sentences...
Take care
christina |
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