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Good Egg - sometimes I ponder cliches
Contributed by
poet_in_waiting
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Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:15:49 PM in AEST
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Skin milky white, but brittle,
even cracking. Yellow inside,
but he’s no coward.
Avoiding walls and high places,
in line with his equals,
keeps his cool in frigid confines.
Thoughts scrambled,
brain cells fried.
He only got laid once,
but does not complain.
He’s a good egg!
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Re: Good Egg - sometimes I ponder cliches
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:20:14 PM AEST
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| This is funny, in a humpty dumpty way, Well written and humorous, thank you for sharing it with us. Sue x |
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Re: Good Egg - sometimes I ponder cliches
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 04:34:41 PM AEST
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| =], this was very original and even though it didnt make me laugh, it was still a good read. its good to come across a write this original, now if only everyone else could find some. =] no telling what a good human is, but a good egg they lead terrible lives. |
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Re: Good Egg - sometimes I ponder cliches
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:38:00 AM AEST
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Very well done!
~Davinah~ |
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