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If Life Should Come Calling
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:28:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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And if life should come calling, please tell her I’m busy,
Things to do, and people to see,
Phone calls to make and places to be,
If she calls, please take a message for me.
And if death should come calling, please tell him I’m gone,
I had something to do; it’s not yet done,
I’m involved in a battle that is not yet won,
Tell him thanks for the journey, I hope he had fun.
And if love should come calling, please tell her I’m out,
I need to buy things that I can’t do without,
Too many heartaches, shadows of doubt,
If she calls tell her I know what she’s about.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-06-20 12:28:10]
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Re: If Life Should Come Calling
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by poet_in_waiting on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:07:00 PM AEST
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| this is very lyrical ... i can almost hear the song ... nice |
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Re: If Life Should Come Calling
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 03:55:11 AM AEST
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I really like this piece. It is very original and clever. very well done:)
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Re: If Life Should Come Calling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 10:04:44 PM AEST
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What a perfect wite, intellectualy as well as emotionaly. Stated very well right up front.
excellant colaboration between words and there meaning, along with the rhytmic values.
Ben |
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