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The End
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This is the end of the war,
and what a fight it was.
This is the end of happiness,
but it doesn't matter anyway.
This is the end of my heart,
that is if I even have one to start with.
This is the end of joy,
if that is even possible in this messed up world.
This is the end of my existence
why live anyway?
This is the end of my relationship,
it never should have started in the first place.
This is the end of my pain,
I'm going to kill it off.
This is the end of my struggle,
I'm done with it all.
This is the end of heartbreak,
time for the future.
This is the end of it all,
I'm tired of it all
This is the end of my life,
cause tonight I will die.
Copyright ©
whiteleo1984
... [
2006-06-20 12:24:01]
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Re: The End
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:31:13 PM AEST
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cheerful... very nice, the absence of rhyme really hammers your point home, well done!
2sdyx
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Re: The End
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by poet_in_waiting on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:09:19 PM AEST
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great finish ... stomps all over you!!
well done |
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Re: The End
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 04:37:35 AM AEST
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short and very to the point. sounds like my 'just a joke' just with all the unnecessary erased. fantastic write, gives you that slap in the face.
~natalya |
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Re: The End
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by Alison on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 07:38:03 PM AEST
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| very deep meanig, well worded, good write! |
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