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POSSESSION
Contributed by
Davinah
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Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:43:57 AM in AEST
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What is this thing that we share.
This painful attraction.
Your anchor holds me in this life.
I cannot release you, though I tried.
Not as much a place in my heart
but a hole in my soul.
Your touches burn and linger on.
Your kisses, sweet poison on my lips.
If I could heal you, I would.
Yet I only know how to destruct.
I came along at the wrong time.
Too late, too empty, too tormented.
Fate bothers me.
What is the point of a vast and eternal plan.
When I cannot give you what you need.
No love, no comfort, no redemption.
And what is it that I feel for you.
But a burning desire to possess.
You would crumble in my hands.
I would leave you in pieces.
You are someone out of my hands.
Cannot understand or have.
So close to me but I dare not touch
your festering heart that aches so much
Copyright ©
Davinah
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Re: POSSESSION
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by a7x36 on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 01:29:05 AM AEST
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| very interesting, i'm not entirely sure wat's going on in this one, but i like how it's all free verse except the rhyme at the end |
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Re: POSSESSION
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 01:51:51 AM AEST
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Very touching write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: POSSESSION
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 08:08:32 AM AEST
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I agree with Emy
a very touching write |
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Re: POSSESSION
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 10:41:11 AM AEST
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very good, good god, love hurts sometimes, huh?
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Re: POSSESSION
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by myselfindreams on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:06:27 PM AEST
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| fully understood |
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Re: POSSESSION
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by Lucid_Tides on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:18:47 PM AEST
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| This poems, in my eyes, relates to the saying, if you really love something, let it go and if it comes back, it's worth keeping. It's a good write and keeps the creative mind thinking. |
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Re: POSSESSION
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 12:54:03 AM AEST
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I like the who's who effect in the begining it is you who is possesed by a longing and in the end u do the possesing but in between the lines no one is realy sure of anything 4 it is the heart that's that posesses the best of both worlds. A most splendid peice of cat and mouse episode.
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Re: POSSESSION
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 11:57:39 PM AEST
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extraordinary.. as I've come to expect-
and the final two lines are very telling indeed:
that darkness does not always invite the same.
..and so your own, has heart afte all-
very intense..
B.
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