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I dont know what to call it.
Contributed by
char1ie20
on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 09:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You are the one
you've carved your name into my heart
I shall follow you both near and from afar
Sight of your face
Takes away the pain instilled
By Ones I loved whom hatred filled
How splendidly
Your form personifies the night
Your silouhette Entraced by the dim starlight
I Came to Thee
Wanting nothing more than you
To join me in the darkness of the moon
Instead you ran
Away from me into the trees
each hurried footstep rustling the leaves
I beggednof you
"do not deny how you feel
Just turn around and end this ordeal"
When i get you
I shall hold you in my arms
And not release you, resisting causes harm
Give into me
Let me bond your soul with mine
This knife shall slice us making us entwined
Our blood will be
the glue that bonds us in our grave
A Crimson token of the love we gave
Here in the soil
We leave our human selves to rot
As we ascend above this world soon to be forgot
A Sacrifice
Is a necessity it seems
For our love to last an eternity
Copyright ©
char1ie20
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2006-06-19 21:25:23]
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Re: I dont know what to call it.
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by Lucid_Tides on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 09:53:58 PM AEST
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| Well, it's pretty emotional for dark poetry, but who am I to judge that. I think it is an overall great poem and you should keep up with the good writing. For random poetry, it's a good write and a good read. |
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Re: I dont know what to call it.
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:32:01 AM AEST
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I liked it. Very well done!
~Davinah~ |
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Re: I dont know what to call it.
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by myselfindreams on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:37:11 PM AEST
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| it starts out with two, am I wrong, or am I tired of reading |
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Re: I dont know what to call it.
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by myselfindreams on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:38:07 PM AEST
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| ok np, I saw the topic |
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