|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
abandon
Contributed by
judasman
on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 04:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
|
you left me shattered
broken
all alone
you walked away
didnt turn back
to see my pain
ripped inside
torn in two
i cried your name
silently to myself
hoping you would hear
you didnt
you left me shattered
Copyright ©
judasman
... [
2006-06-19 16:28:46]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: abandon
(User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 04:48:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a good read...great emotion with so few words!
wiz |
|
|
Re: abandon
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:36:30 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Strong emotion and I agree your pain is felt so deeply with a few lines. A great write, sorry for the pain that caused it though.
Michelle |
|
|
Re: abandon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 06:13:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It's short, but it says it all...
Deep and heartfelt. Very nice!
~Davinah~ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
