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make the choise
Contributed by
Keila
on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 12:11:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am silent
And a tear rolls down my cheek in the dark
You hold me close without noticing
and whisper a word into my ear
What is it you want me to hear?
Is it the truth I hear or what I want
Do not lie to me, I will leave you behind
Pain of life squeezes the happiness from me
Try to remember what is important
And why my life is so hollow it hurts
Every day it gets worse
But I know the reason, its you
And something has to be done
You have to make the choice
you don’t want to, you want it all
if you make it will I lose?
Or will you hold true
Make it before I fade from you
Copyright ©
Keila
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2006-06-19 12:11:59]
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Re: make the choise
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:08:49 AM AEST
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It hurts when someone refuses to make a decision, doesn't it?... Been there...
Very nice poem!
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Re: make the choise
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by lovestruck on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 10:46:17 PM AEST
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this was a good write the very end where you say "before i fade from you" really struck me because i've been going through this same feeling of fading away from someone but i didnt know what to call it i'll have to write a poem ! :D
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Re: make the choise
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:19:52 PM AEST
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It scares me to think of just how many people are in this same situation.
You did a good job on this. The frustration of the indesiciveness comes through strongly. |
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