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In A Dream

Contributed by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 10:57:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

And suddenly the earth turns black, as the sky begins to fall,
And the realisation dawns; you never knew me; not at all.
Hushed silence, calling to some deep part of me,
A voice that sings, solemn, and free,
A whirlwind of thought that sweeps me away,
A bitter blue feeling, that has nothing to say.

Dreams.

Pure as sand, as sea, as air,
It’s everything and everywhere,
In the words you whisper, the tears you cry,
The voice in your head that keeps on asking ‘why?’
It’s the lies in your heart, awaiting the day,
That bitter black feeling that has nothing to say.

You may not know me, lover, but your love was just enough,
Always gentle and all consuming, yet strong, flexible and tough.

Copyright Â© Ruby2sdy ... [ 2006-06-19 10:57:13]
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Re: In A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 07:17:11 PM AEST
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This is truly beautiful. Again u wisk me away with your style and deep emotional expression. Speaking of the sea, that's what the flow of this lovely write reminds me of, the ever poetic ebb and flow of life and love.
a most splendid peice of writting.

Ben

Re: In A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 09:32:25 PM AEST
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nicely done!

wiz

Re: In A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:02:27 PM AEST
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Well dreams are the window to our soul, And you have described yours so well. Enjoyed this poem immensley. Thank you . Sue x

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