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Summer Fling...Don't Mean A Thing?

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 10:04:01 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Do you see the stars?

Those sparkles in the skies...

Skies in the blues of my eyes

Cuz my head's in the clouds

Got my feet on the ground

But it's all like a roller coaster

The rushing lift in the body

The lifting of spirits

With tense apprehension

Of all the unknown

Although, if I may,

I've a few words to say

T's not my fault that you've only noticed just now

And you, I could brighten those eyes and that smile

But you, yeah, we might need some work

And... I... I can't make up my mind

So you figure out what you want

And you pay attention for your own good

And don't back down, it's the last thing you need

It's all up to you

I'll live it up if that's just what you want

Don't leave me alone, hangin out on a limb

Cuz those stars in the skies

That reflect in these eyes

Are just hoping

For something

Like you

Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2006-06-19 10:04:01]
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Re: Summer Fling...Don't Mean A Thing? (User Rating: 1 )
by wrdz on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 06:38:10 PM AEST
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Don't YOU give up. Keep those feet planted firmly on the ground. If things don't work out there, then there are more just like it, only willing to accept you for who you are. And are willing to work for and with you. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz

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