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Retail looks good to me
Contributed by
twick
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Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:36:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I fell short of the understanding and
yelled across the distance,
"Could you pass me a rope?"
The only reply was,
"You'll have to make you own."
I was sad because I carried
nothing,
so deep was my despair I was not
thinking,
and I only sat down
wondering why I should ever care.
Perhaps I decided I shouldn't,
and walked away undaunted
as the wind lifted my hair.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-06-19 01:36:36]
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Re: Retail looks good to me
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by deadclown on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 03:34:10 PM AEST
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| Read this over a few times to try to understand what this poem is about. Don't get me wrong I'm not putting this down in anyway. I'm just interested to know what you are trying to say. I'm not exactly the brightest spark so maybe I've just missed something myself. Be good to know though |
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Re: Retail looks good to me
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:30:29 AM AEST
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| hey there...i haven't been online in months but i noticed you commented on a couple of my poems and i wanted to thank you for that. i really enjoyed this poem mainly because it made me think...i'm sure you had a purpose when you wrote it but i love coming up with my own interpretations...good work |
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