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A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
Contributed by
a7x36
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Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:11:28 AM in AEST
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I'm crazy,
but I know I'm crazy,
so doesn't that make me not crazy?
No, my friend,
you're still crazy.
But I shouldn't be,
cause I have enought thought
to realize that I might be crazy.
You're wrong again buddy!
You most definately are crazy.
If you were sane,
you wouldn't convince yourself that you're not.
You're crazy because you think
about whether you're crazy or not.
That doesn't make sense.
Yes it does.
I'm not insane!
Then why are you talking to yourself?
I'm not, this is all thoughts,
I'm not talking to anyone.
Then why are you "thinking" in dialogue?
Everyone does this.
It's just a personal struggle.
It's cause it's late and I'm stressed out.
Normal people don't do this,
only you, kid.
You lie...
Look at me, I'm a wreck!
I should go to bed,
clear my thoughts.
That doesn't change anything,
you'll still be insane tomorrow.
Stop saying that!
See, I told you.
Only crazy people yell at themselves.
Maybe I am insane...
No you're not.
Don't mess with me like that!
You lying fiend!
Get out of my head!
I think I just need a padded wall
to hit my head against.
No you don't.
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Re: A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:12:58 AM AEST
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| i screwed up w/the author's notes, so i hafta comment them: only the first "stanza" is actual thought, the rest is just stuff i made up cuz i thought it would be a cool poem/story |
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Re: A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
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by twick on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:45:18 AM AEST
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| I liked your poem, it made me smile. I argue with myself all the time. But I call the voices in my head, my muse, and they produce the words that become these poems. I think I 'd rather be crazy anyway, then I'd at least have an excuse. |
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Re: A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 05:58:42 AM AEST
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You gotta be crazy to survive on this Planet.
Great writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 07:13:13 AM AEST
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Very unique and original!
Well stated,
Jeff
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Re: A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
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by poet_in_waiting on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 09:26:53 AM AEST
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love it ... it smacks of everyday life ... remember .. we all need a therapist .. most of us here have chosen poetry as ours.
crazy is a s crazy does ...
what does that mean?
i don't know ..
then why say it?
shut up!
cheers
sean |
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Re: A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
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by randumbchit on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 02:39:25 PM AEST
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| being cracy is a bad thing? Loved the write |
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Re: A Sign That I May Need Mental Help
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by midian on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:49:13 AM AEST
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| i truly appreciated this poem i found it both entertaining and perplexing. thankyou for the muse |
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