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Insanity
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 11:04:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I wake up falling, falling into time's vortex
Free falling into void's winter dance
Rising to calls from destiny's deep south
Walking alone through grey minds and cave thoughts.
Time winks through its deceptive veils
Splaying naïve lives into futile games
Tender minds walk through dark miasmic lives
And destiny reasons they are issues to be cleared.
Crowds move in eager amoebic rhythm
Nodding at prayer houses, frowning at good
Every word from a mother's mouth
Churns blue poison into a skeletal heart
Bleeding black, wrenched by cruel deceit
Toyed at by adults, tiny imprints-
Of dirty hands and sick minds
Fusing a young mind's nightmares and dreams
Throwing her into this life's death-grip
In to the stretched arms of grief's heavy quiet
Living at the edge of a planet gone insane.
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2006-06-18 23:04:46]
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Re: Insanity
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 12:56:44 AM AEST
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| you've got a heck of a vocabulary, a little confusing at times,but overall it's very original and it avoids the emo feeling and is instead rlly dark and cold |
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Re: Insanity
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by Lucid_Tides on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:58:57 AM AEST
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| This poem has a lot of heart and emotion behind it, it seems like the world is driving one insane. It can do that. Very good, and like someone already said, good vocabulary, that's always a plus. |
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