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pebbled future
Contributed by
wolf_tamer
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Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 01:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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the slightest movement
can change the course of the future
which is why the future is like a river
the river is always moving
but throw in a pebble
and the river changes
just like the future
with every action
anywhere you look
everywhere you go
the future changes to frame it's course
but with thousands of people
there is thousands of futures
only you can change your future
only you can be the pebble in the river.
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2006-06-18 13:57:04]
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Re: pebbled future
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 02:02:26 PM AEST
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nice, the sentiment is so very true, and the beat is awesome (flows like a river!) good write,
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Re: pebbled future
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by candysears on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 02:56:07 PM AEST
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Very nice write..
God Bless! |
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Re: pebbled future
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 04:42:32 PM AEST
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I like the analogy here, wolf. Also from that one pebble
the impact can be enormous. It affects the whole river ...
the ripples may get smaller as they reach shore, but
the impact radiates in all directions.
Great write. Very enjoyable and thought provoking.
~Breezy |
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Re: pebbled future
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by poet_in_waiting on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 09:59:15 AM AEST
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definately in the right category wolf ..
thnx
sean |
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Re: pebbled future
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 11:45:15 PM AEST
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Although it was somewhat inspirational I wouldn't call it that. I would say that it is more insightful, but i do see where you are coming from. Either way i still liked it.
Peace, love, and bubblegum!!! |
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