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My love, take away your tears......
Contributed by
ravisada
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Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 06:57:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I felt your tears in my heart when you cried my love.
Your tears of sadness are the most painful to shed
When you are worried, I am more worried than you
Because your tears could bring my heart sad forever
All I can say to you is...
Take away your tears and walk with me
Take away your sorrow and smile with me
Take away your pain and talk with me
Take away your worries and sing with me
Life is there for you to live the way you want.
and make your world to come around for you
I felt your love in my heart when you smiled my love
Your tears of happiness are the most joyous to pour
When you are happy, I am more happy than you
Because your love could bring my heart happy forever
All I can say to you is..........
Take away your tears and walk with me
Take away your sorrow and smile with me
Take away your pain and talk with me
Take away your worries and sing with me
Life is there for you to live the way you want.
and make your world to come around for you
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2006 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2006-06-18 06:57:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My love, take away your tears......
(User Rating: 1 ) by EddieDean on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 11:52:02 AM AEST (User
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Wow.....just....wow.....this write is what I wanted to say to someone special. But I just couldn't find the words, I couldn't find the courage. Thank you for writing this, its what I need to say to her.
Thank you...
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Re: My love, take away your tears......
(User Rating: 1 ) by bluestars on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 02:05:29 AM AEST (User
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Great poem,
you did a good job in showing all your emotions.
Keep up the good work |
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