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Memories of Summer
Contributed by
marie
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 05:06:47 PM in AEST
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Lazy summer days, lounging by the pool,
Doing anything we can just to keep cool.
Walking with friends all through the town,
From the sun-up to the sundown.
Watching sunsets, laying out on the beach,
Into that someone's hand I do reach.
Breathe in the wonder and awe,
No emotion should you withdraw.
Take in the waves and smell the salt,
Bring all that comes to a complete halt.
Sleep in late, wake up to the sun,
Knowing your day has only just begun...
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marie
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2006-06-17 17:06:47]
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Re: Memories of Summer
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by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:46:14 PM AEST
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I can feel the summer in your poem. You created wonderful imagery, I like it.
Look at some of mine please.
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Re: Memories of Summer
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by Spike on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 06:50:45 AM AEST
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Ditto the first comment. The languid heat just rises off the words. Ah, Summer.
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Re: Memories of Summer
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 12:48:25 AM AEST
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Living in Florida you might think I would be innured to the wiles of your piece yet it is evocative as I pick up shells and even cups to listen for the sea. Lucid, concise and a bit skeletal like Ravel's "Bolero" which is excellent but I would love if you fleshed it out I guess it leaves me wanting more of that day.
Peace
Yangdantien
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