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secret holders
Contributed by
wolf_tamer
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:24:22 PM in AEST
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every single second
of every single day
someone out there is dying
in this world, they will not stay.
truely, physically dying
emotionally as well
all just carrying secrets
wishing they had someone to tell.
never really knowing
anyone that they can trust
they search their minds for salvation
but it always comes down to lust.
secrets are terrible
they rip your mind apart
they lead you to insanity
right from the very start.
which is why everyone dies
at every single moment
if they only had a secret holder
they may live another second.
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wolf_tamer
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2006-06-17 14:24:22]
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Re: secret holders
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:34:47 PM AEST
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| very well put and it flowed i like this write |
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Re: secret holders
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:23:12 PM AEST
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I don't often quote works.. but this particular stanza needs mentioning again and again:
"secrets are terrible
they rip your mind apart
they lead you to insanity
right from the very start."
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Re: secret holders
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:04:27 PM AEST
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Nice write wise to words to ponder
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