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Emy Comes To The Rescue
Contributed by
secretwind
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 05:31:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look out the window
thinking in silence of many things
things like
should I stay or should i go,
we walk we talk we breathe
we dance and sing
we all have dreams
but what we need
no one ever really knows.
This world moves so fast
whenever I pause
to comptemplate
the chaos takes control
and I get spun round and round,
I walk In a straight line
as mixed emotions
cut me deep inside
the sun is shinning bright
but I am down.
It's so hard to breathe
I self analyze myself
and I don't like
what I am seeing
but I know
when I need something to believe
I see a star shinning
and I can feel
there is a reason for living
and I flow
like a warm breeze
and I know I been saved again
emy comes to the rescue.
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secretwind
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:26:44 AM AEST
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| beautiful write thanks for sharing |
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:50:02 AM AEST
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very nice flow there and deep too
great write
VAMP |
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue
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by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 06:02:57 PM AEST
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emotional write for you... but it would help if i knew the story behind "emy." i enjoyed this poem over all
♥chey |
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue
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by Shattered_soul on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:49:34 PM AEST
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Nicely written.
unique in its own ways
and yet the same
things inside me
are written down
by you.
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:19:21 PM AEST
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Wow!!
what an awesome way to start my day.
The resque thingy works both was my dear sweet friend.
Gosh I'm just overwhelmed with this very encouraging, rockin write.
u always know how to get this star dazzling.
I;m very seldom at a loss for words but right now, I'm speechless.
luvu mucho, friend.
luv, huggs, big ole heart smiles,
emy |
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 09:21:59 AM AEST
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Friendship and love are simply gaining strength and giving strength to each other. I think (there I go thinking again) "like a warm breeze" some strength was given and gained in this poem. Good work.
KenMoore
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 10:15:36 AM AEST
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To have a dear friend that will truly LISTEN when you need a LISTENER to be near, is so like Emy!
She's a bright star to all need!
Beautifully written thoughts about friendship without greed!
Warm love
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