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Someday
Contributed by
bluestars
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:29:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Someday I will know how to get by
someday I will know the answer to "why?"
Someday I'll understand myself,
someday you'll understand me.
Some days just seem like hell.
some days I feel alone
Someday I'll learn to say goodbye,
to the memories of the past.
Some days I'm blind,
some days I just like to hide.
Someday you'll remember about me
and find out how much it hurts.
Some days are blue,
and some days are grey.
This someday seems so far, far away.
Some days I'll smile,
and some days I won't.
One day you're happy,
the next your gone.
Can you tell me what went wrong?
Some days I'll wait,
but sometimes I can't.
Some days go slow,
but time goes so fast.
One day you said,
"This is gonna last."
Someday you'll realize,
how much I love you...
And someday I will be free,
to fly out of my misery.
But, until then I will wait
for someday...
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bluestars
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2006-06-17 02:29:56]
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Re: Someday
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:17:18 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem of sad expression. It
was lovely 2 read, i got lost in it. your style is very pronounced and eliquent.
Ben |
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Re: Someday
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:36:48 AM AEST
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| what an beautiful read heartfelt |
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Re: Someday
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by wolf_tamer on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:58:40 PM AEST
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i know how you feel. and your right. some day will happen. eventually. all we have to do is wait for that someday to come.
~wolf~ |
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Re: Someday
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 10:45:04 AM AEST
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You know, often times I don't much like repetition in poetry, but this is a good blend. You've utilized it well. Also, it's a beautiful, insightful poem.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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