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My Angel
Contributed by
Kevin
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:38:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your on my mind, your in my soul
Your breath, your life, fills the empty hole
Your smile, your touch, alone with me
I’m thinking of you constantly
With you I lie, in bed at night
Words of love to you I recite
Slowly I feel a smile upon my face
With you held in a deep embrace
Softly in the sand, I write your name
Never again will I feel the same
I cherish you above the rest
You are the greatest, simply the best
When I stare in your eyes, I still feel that spark
Even in times of endless dark
The love you give warms my heart
Without you, I’d simply fall apart
Hand in hand, I feel your heat
Our souls connected, I am complete
You are the one, my gracious dove
And my angel, my one true love
Copyright ©
Kevin
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2006-06-17 01:38:24]
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Re: My Angel
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by bluestars on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:43:54 AM AEST
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Wow what a beautiful poem,
it makes me want to cry...
I would feel so special if someone wrote
that about me.
Looking forward in reading more of your work
Best wishes,
~*Eve*~ |
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Re: My Angel
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:10:02 AM AEST
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Magic!
U both are very lucky.
a masterpeice of heaven on Planet Earth.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Angel
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by marjanhr on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 03:17:13 AM AEST
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| Wow your love should be so lucky to have someone like you.best wishes for you and your love.......huggs :) |
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Re: My Angel
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 05:46:04 AM AEST
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real good flow
well done |
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Re: My Angel
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:39:39 AM AEST
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| great that was awesome very good write and flowed thanks for sharing |
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Re: My Angel
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by Alison on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 05:20:39 PM AEST
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| very sweet and moving, great write! |
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Re: My Angel
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:39:25 PM AEST
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an exceptional romantic ode..
lovely-
B. |
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Re: My Angel
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by breny on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:33:47 AM AEST
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This is a well written peice.
I like the flow and sincerity.
And I can relate very much with the feelings you descibed.
Great job!
~Brenna~ |
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