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False Lawyer
Contributed by
cheetham
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:23:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You feel the world sink beneath your feet,
Shapes and sounds collide.
They meet and melt into one another,
Emotions disintegrate, rupture and burn away.
The sky cracks, shatters and rains down,
falling into the receeding ocean.
It's a timeless release...
The space in which you stand,
It fractures, errodes and falls away.
The time for thinking, any final contemplation,
has long since passed.
There is no 'time' anymore,
It ceased to be long ago.
It shook under the strain and split aside.
Brushed aside by imploding dreams...
Eternally led by the desire to culminate
As you bid the evaporating world,
a lingering farewell.
Stretch your muscles one final time,
Shrug of the shackels of regression.
Nestle your restless mind into the recesses,
and begin to feel the warm embrace of tranquility
Eternally at ease...
Copyright ©
cheetham
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2006-06-17 01:23:14]
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Re: False Lawyer
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:32:32 AM AEST
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A person needs to be their own attorney these days.
Very powerfull write.
Bet cha feel better now that u got that off your chess.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: False Lawyer
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:47:08 AM AEST
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I like this. I am unsure what to make of it, it seems to go into a lot of detail, and use some wonderful imagery, but I have no idea what the title has to do with any of it.
I like the second stanza. You have some nice lines in that one.
There is no 'time' anymore,
It ceased to be long ago.
It shook under the strain and split aside.
Brushed aside by imploding dreams...
Loved that.
Good write,
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: False Lawyer
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:42:43 AM AEST
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| this write was profound and powerful i felt these words thanks for sharing |
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Re: False Lawyer
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 10:18:52 AM AEST
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This is indeed a powerful and well written piece. I felt pulled in to the the images of time and destruction -the inevitable end of things as we know them. Excellent write!
Butch |
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